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THREADS by *kagrmom:iconkagrmom:

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Woven into our lives are different coloured threads:

The BLUE ones are airy and light....
GREEN are restful, soothing.

RED shines bright, but will fade with time....
PURPLE glows regal, lusty.

The GREY ones haven't lived up to their potential....
WHITE reflects other's light.

BROWN stands in the shadows....
YELLOW sings lovely songs.

BLACK holds a vibrant background....
SILVER glimmers in the the weave.

BUT, you are my special and loving
GOLDEN THREAD sewn deep in the
tapestry of my SOUL.
©2004-2008 *kagrmom
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One comes across every colour of thread in their lives, but rarely does one find a perfect, gold one!

This is for you, My Dear One!

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~triplesecman:icontriplesecman: Jul 23, 2004, 6:31:45 PM
I like the last stanza best.

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RAWKFIST! :headbang:

Yes, it IS as simple as that.

When people comment on your stuff, return the favor... Read theirs.
~whisperingvapor:iconwhisperingvapor: Jul 23, 2004, 9:39:05 PM
wow, that is beautiful :)

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`Contrariwise: if it was so, it might be; and if it were so, it would be; but as it isn't, it ain't. That's logic!' -Through The Looking Glass
~Y4-Freak-On-A-Leash:iconY4-Freak-On-A-Leash: Jul 24, 2004, 2:53:04 PM
I love it. Well done.

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It is better to know u are insane then it is to go insane trying to find out who you are.
~ladywillowraven:iconladywillowraven: Jul 25, 2004, 12:24:52 PM
I absolutely LOVE this!! What a wonderful way of expressing this!

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-LadyWillowraven

"Hear me now, all crimes must be treasured if they bring thee pleasure somehow." -CoF
*kagrmom:iconkagrmom: Jul 26, 2004, 7:30:29 AM
Thank you so much!

I love your comments.......you are always so positive and it is rewarding to hear them!

:hug:

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mari



A man's home is his castle.....let him clean it........anon
~sandam:iconsandam: Jul 28, 2004, 2:57:31 PM
Such lovely imagery. I hope that I will oneday look back on the weave of my live and see a coat of many colours with little grey.

A;?

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We are the poeple our parents warned us about

Nothing pisses non-conformists off more than other non-conformists who refuse to conform to the rules of non-conformity.

When Life gets you down,
Stand up.
Look him in the eyes.
And knee the sucker in
*kique-ass:iconkique-ass: Aug 5, 2004, 12:05:27 PM
Heh, I was reading 'My gift to you' the other day...it always makes me happy when I read a few of your poems, so Thank you! :hug:

I like this one...you always are able to find a new way of looking at love. I am intruiged by the line "The GREY ones haven't lived up to their potential...." Strikes a chord somehow.

:thumbsup:

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"I love Elton John's eyebrow but not the man himself" - Mo

"An emo drink would be something vodka based with a toy that sinks upside down in it." - Benjiman
*kagrmom:iconkagrmom: Aug 5, 2004, 12:30:41 PM
Thank you so much.....as always, you are so kind!!

I haven't heard from you in awhile. How are you?

:hug:

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mari



A man's home is his castle.....let him clean it........anon
*kique-ass:iconkique-ass: Aug 6, 2004, 2:02:12 AM
hug-a-riffic! :hug: :hug:

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"I love Elton John's eyebrow but not the man himself" - Mo

"An emo drink would be something vodka based with a toy that sinks upside down in it." - Benjiman
~alwayzdazd:iconalwayzdazd: Aug 14, 2004, 4:30:28 PM
absolutely beautiful. i love the way you can make me look at things in a way i haven't before.

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Am I the star beneath the stairs?

Am I a ghost upon the stage?

Am I your anything?


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