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YOU ARE by *kagrmom:iconkagrmom:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Other Romance > Spoken Word


YOU ARE.....

The match that lights my incense....
The words of a long-forgotten melody.

The best piece of chocolate...
In the box saved for last.

The bright and shiny coin that I
Hide away to view alone.

You make me smile with happiness.
I cherish you, My Love.
©2005-2008 *kagrmom
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~raphi-kun:iconraphi-kun: Dec 17, 2005, 2:29:05 PM
i really like this. it fits perfectly into these "special" situations

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*kagrmom:iconkagrmom: Dec 19, 2005, 2:48:55 PM
Thank you very much!

:hug:

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mari



A man's home is his castle.....let him clean it........anon
~sunnylikethenight:iconsunnylikethenight: Jan 8, 2006, 10:24:17 AM
awww thats what i think right now! wonderful words :hug:
*kagrmom:iconkagrmom: Jan 9, 2006, 7:18:14 AM
Thank you! Nice to hear from you again!

:hug:

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mari



A man's home is his castle.....let him clean it........anon
*kagrmom:iconkagrmom: Jan 10, 2006, 6:58:48 AM
Thank you once again! :hug:

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mari



A man's home is his castle.....let him clean it........anon
~calthas:iconcalthas: Jan 19, 2006, 9:14:32 PM
I enjoyed reading it. It is a lovely form and style on thing I have trouble with is the first stanza second line does not corresponde like the following stanzas. It could just be me, but it is still a beautiful piece.

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Do not follow me for I will lead you into pain. Do not allow me to follow you for I will hurt you. Walk beside me and we may go forever.

"As darkness falls, night unfolds ebon wings to wrap the world in its dark embrace." Unknown
*kagrmom:iconkagrmom: Jan 26, 2006, 6:50:35 AM
Thank you!

:hug:

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mari



A man's home is his castle.....let him clean it........anon
~calthas:iconcalthas: Jan 29, 2006, 9:40:11 PM
:hug: you are welcome

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Do not follow me for I will lead you into pain. Do not allow me to follow you for I will hurt you. Walk beside me and we may go forever.

"As darkness falls, night unfolds ebon wings to wrap the world in its dark embrace." Unknown
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